In order to get a decent, and realistic, amount of elevation I've had to shorten the recoil frame. I always knew this would be the case. After all, there are no guidelines or instructions for this: it's up to the builder to figure out what will work, and what won't.

Now, on full elevation, the recoil passes through the turret- floor without hitting it.

All good.
One tricky design conundum to solve: the recoil arm movement requires the barrel to be slightly offset. This means the frame will have to be offset too, because of the lack of symmetry.
Here's the gun, and recoil, now in the optimum position (gun is in battery):

From below, you can see that I've had to fashion some styrene spacers to create the correct offset.

The packing pieces are actually bonded to another piece of styrene beneath the barrel. It's the tight fit I was looking for, but it will also be pinned, and locked against the gun tube with small screws passing through the original trunnion holes. The gun tube now supports the entire recoil breech, and attaches it to the Mantlet.
Here's the gun on full elevation, unobstructed by the turret floor. Phew...

You can see the channel, on the left of the breech, where the elevation arm will run. That's going to be the next big challenge.